Too many words in NYO’s rebrandNews
Britain’s outstanding National Youth Orchestra has upgraded its website ‘to grow a welcoming community where thousands of young people can play their part in the world through music.’
For 75 years, NYO has done brilliantly what it says in the name: it helps young people to play in an orchestra.
The rest is verbiage.
The site actually brags of ‘Rewritten information that’s clearer and easier to understand’.